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You have helped me tremendously with my personal statement and on my journey as a premed student. Thank you so much for your feedback and guidance. I knew there were parts of my PS that really needed to be stronger, but I just didn't know what to work on or how to go about it. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my PS and give comments. ~ Navedeep
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I can't thank you enough for your help. Both for guiding me in the right direction with the paper and completely revising it. I made a few minor changes to the final draft you sent me last week and submitted the application that day. I received an Acceptance letter yesterday. It is difficult to write about oneself, especially one's failures and I'm grateful for your quick and great work. Thank you again for everything. ~ Rochelle
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I am incredibly thrilled to let you know that I have been accepted to medical school at Case Western Reserve! The school is absolutely incredible with many opportunities. That being said - the school's statistics (gpa, sgpa, and otherwise) - are off the charts, so I know that Personal Statement that you helped me with made a difference. Thank You. I am very hopeful about my future in medicine, and I know that I could not have gotten to this point without your advice and edits on the PS. ~ Joanna
Here's The REAL REASON Why You're Struggling Writing Your Medical School Personal Statement & What You Must Do To Get ACCEPTED!
Have you ever considered?
You've never written a personal statement for medical school... and if you have it wasn't good enough otherwise you'd be on your way to becoming a doctor by now.
The directions are extremely open ended, leaving lots of room for error.
Can you pause for a minute and put yourself in the shoes of your Reader?
One of the biggest gripes AdComs have when reading your personal statement is that it's not "personal" enough. Meaning you are providing a broad overview without digging deep by sticking to the superficial "safe" topics.
If you do this you end up sounding like everyone else applying without any chance of distinguishing yourself from the competition.
When you're a diamond in the rough premed you get lost in the crowd and don't get into medical school.
Is this what you want?
I know you want to come across as different however there's a right way and wrong way about going about it.
I have to warn you to avoid the 3 topics AdComs see every year from unaware premed students that can totally kill your chances of making a positive impression on your Reader.
I know you want to be a doctor more than anything which means you're willing to take risks if it gets you closer to an acceptance.
However, don't be foolish!
If you are thinking of asking an anonymous stranger online to help with their personal statement you need to STOP!
Why?
You have no clue who this individual is or their credentials for getting into medical school.
Maybe you think a safer route is to ask a newly admitted medical student or a trusted friend but its still a case of the blind leading the blind.
Plus, most students are in no position to understand what actually works for medical school admissions let alone have the exprience to critique your medical school essay appropriately.
There's a reason why 60% of first time applicants to medical school are REJECTED!
You worked too hard:
- in your premed classes
- on the MCAT
- and racking up 100s of hours worth of extracurriculars
to see your hard work flushed down the drain because you chose to work with the wrong person on the most important essay of your life.
I want more for you!
I want to give you a fighting chance of actually getting into medical school with your personal statement.
The Cold Hard Truth is:
The personal statement is your chance to distinguish yourself from 53,791 applicants who are equally or more qualified than you.
If You Don’t Convincingly SELL YOURSELF to AdComs, You Will Remain a Run-of-the-Mill Applicant.
And Run-of-the-Mill Applicants Get REJECTED.
Show me JUST ONE premed student who prefers a trial-by-fire approach to writing their medical school personal statement and is extremely SATISFIED with their application outcome.
You can’t!
That’s because they know if they went the extra mile and got the help they needed the outcome would have been completely different.
Imagine going from REJECTED at every medical school you apply to being ACCEPTED to your first choice medical school.
This is entirely possible when you get expert help with the writing of your medical school essay.
Remember, your ONE Personal Statement is sent to all the medical schools you apply to.
Meaning one mistake is exponentially compounded...
Every medical school will see your mistake making it easy for them to REJECT your entire application.
Think I'm lying?
Put yourself in the shoes of AdComs.
They have more applications than they can possibly admit so they are actively looking for reasons to say NO in order to have a manageable number of applications to review in-depth.
You may be stressed out about getting into medical school, but what about your parents?
Parents who want nothing else to burst with PRIDE knowing they RAISED a DOCTOR and all the bragging rights that come along too.
Your parents will stop at nothing to give you every conceivable advantage to ensure you get into medical school.
Did you know?
You're competing against these premed households.
These families are not doing random internet searches to write their personal statement.
Right?
Just like they enrolled in expensive commercial MCAT prep courses and found the best individual tutors to excel academically they're not leaving the personal statement to chance.
Mom and Dad may be physicians themselves but it's been awhile since they applied and they want to work with someone who has their pulse on the admissions strategies that are working right now.
You're in the big leagues now where the competition is steep and you'd be doing your future self a disservice if you don't get expert help in crafting your personal statement for medical school today.
I've helped countless students gain clarity on what makes for a compelling medical school essay that leads to YES, and it's time for you to write your way to medical school too!
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- Avoid common premed mistakes that can totally kill your chances of getting in
- Follow a Proven Script so that your essay stands out and outshines the competition.
- Finally gain clarity on exactly what you must write about and topics to avoid at all costs in your personal statement (every year premeds write about 3 topics AdComs never want to hear about)
- Learn how to actually connect with your READER so no matter what they are advocating to the committee you must be admitted.
- Walk away with a personal statement that is better than anything you could've come up with on your own...which totally makes the case of Why Medicine & Why YOU!
My Promise to You:
When you work with me, I guarantee you'll be amazed with the transformation of your medical school essay... literally a written masterpiece leading to your MEDICAL SCHOOL ACCEPTANCE!
I will use all of my expertise and experience to help you write an admission worthy medical school personal statement.
My goal is to help you share your authentic voice as you craft the most compelling personal statement making the strongest case of why you deserve to be in medical school.
I want to be clear that since this is a service provided there are no refunds.
However, you can trust me that all of your personal statement needs will be met when you work with me. I look forward to helping you WRITE YOUR WAY to medical school!
Why You Can Trust Me To Edit Your Personal Statement for Medical School:

Since starting DoctorPremed in 2008, I've helped hundreds of premedical students successfully get into medical school.
Your personal statement is not something to figure out as you go.
You need to know what to say and more importantly how to say it in a manner that moves an AdCom to look favorably on your candidacy for medical school.
Does that make sense?
My experience combined with my talent for bringing out your unique story will set you apart from the other applicants to bolster your chances of successfully getting into medical school.
Plus, if you hate writing or don't know what to write I have your back.
While an undergrad at Northwestern University (Evanston, IL), I served as the president of the premedical society and in this role I made contacts with AdComs from the top medical schools across the country.
Meaning I am uniquely qualified to give you a comprehensive assessment of what makes for a quality medical school essay.
While most editors can only advise based on their personal experience or limited to a few medical schools, I give you universally accepted insights and guidance so that your essay withstands the harshest scrutiny no matter where you apply to medical school.
Plus, personal statement writing is my "superpower".
Yes, you want the guy who eats, sleeps and breathes personal statements on your side.
I promise you will be blown away by the transformation from when you submit your first draft to when you have the final document in your hand.
At the same time do not worry about losing your voice or feel your true essence isn't being represented.
Leave the editing to me so that you can submit your medical school personal statement with confidence knowing it showcases what makes you unique while answering Why Medicine and Why You...
These are the two questions your Reader expects you to answer.
Have you answered them?
Believe it or not I enjoy everything associated with helping you craft an amazing medical school personal statement.
It is my pleasure to help you craft a masterpiece essay that will leave AdComs begging to grant you a medical school interview invite.
Do you want this for yourself?
If yes, then please click the link below to get started working with me today!
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How My Medical School Personal Statement Editing Service Works
1. Choose the editing package of your choice. Yes, you can upgrade at a later time too.
2. Submit payment.
3. Send your personal statement to me via email: Jason [at] doctorpremed [dot] com
4. Please note your essay should be complete or nearly complete and adhere to AMCAS guidelines of 5, 300 characters (as best as possible).
5. Upon receipt of your personal statement my turnaround time is 24 to 72 hrs.
Please be mindful of the fact it is not ethical for me to actually write your personal statement for you. However, I will guide you, revise, and provide plenty of comments, feedback and suggestions throughout the writing process.
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